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Saturday 4 October 2014
Chelsea's 100wc - week 5...
Scared and nervous, as i looked around all i could see was skeltons and blood dripping on the dirty,dull floor. Suddenly i heard a loud roar coming from the overside of the cave and could see a pair of blood red eyes beaming in the dark. So frightened that i could not even move and i could see it scorpion’s tails getting ready to stap me. It started to run towards me and then i fell down to the ground screaming in pain as i looked at my leg seeing a massive bite on it. And then being draged down to the bowels hell and thinking iam i ever going to see dalight ever again….
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The bowels of hell. Really good story chelsea
ReplyDeleteWELL DONE very good words i really liked the ending!
ReplyDeleteAwsome language I love the ending
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