As i looked around all i could see is pitch black… Everybody had gone, disappeared like it was magic. I tried to find them: looked everywhere I could possibly of looked.
"Mum dad?!" I cried! No answer...
I knew this haunted house would be a mistake, I knew we would lose each other, I knew that I would be the one worrying.
"MUM, DAD, BROTHER, SISTER! Where are you?"
I went outside to see if they were waiting...
There car had gone they had left me behind . They had gone what was I apposed to do stay here, head home speak to someone..
That was really interesting
ReplyDeletewow ellie that really spooky i love it
ReplyDeletewow ellie thats really spooky love it
ReplyDeletewow ellie all of that is amazing and i really like all of your 100wc i think you are a good witer
ReplyDeleteEllie your story is EPIC! you are good at the 100wc you should write up lots more 100 word challenge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! From Rosie
ReplyDeleteWELL DONE
ReplyDeleteLooks like you worked very hard on that 100 word challenge # Awsome.
ReplyDeletewow your story is great ellie it is so spooky i wander what will happen next ? come read ours at maple class blog :)
ReplyDeleteYou made a brilent story made my prade for your story WELL DONE
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