Monday 13 October 2014

Adom's fantastic new sentence type!

Adom has come up with a brilliant new sentence type in his mythical story! Introducing the 'little, little, little' sentence!!!


Once deep into the mighty sea, Eleni had little food, little strength and what seemed to be little life left, but she powered on through the rough waves...
(c) Adom B, 2014.

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  1. JammieDodger13 October 2014 at 08:30

    Well done Adom

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  2. Alisha19 October 2014 at 06:13

    I rell injoyd the part where one deep into mighty sea

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  3. Miss Goodall3 November 2014 at 03:29

    Well done Adom, you have made it sound very dramatic.

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