Hi Izzy. I really enjoyed reading your writing for this week's 100WC. I can see from your editing how you've really thought about which words to use for effect. I really like your description of her hair running with this wind as it paints such a clear picture in my mind of how her hair was moving. Great writing, well done Su Harris (Team 100WC Suffolk, UK)
Hi Izzy. I really enjoyed reading your writing for this week's 100WC. I can see from your editing how you've really thought about which words to use for effect. I really like your description of her hair running with this wind as it paints such a clear picture in my mind of how her hair was moving. Great writing, well done
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Brilliant work Izzy! Your word choices really made an impact on your writing.
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