This is very nice. You have written using a combination of sentence structures, I particularly like your use of comma's. It is always nice to see a different take on the 100wc prompt. The ending flowed fluently and I could easily keep reading it. Good job Coral.
This is very nice. You have written using a combination of sentence structures, I particularly like your use of comma's. It is always nice to see a different take on the 100wc prompt. The ending flowed fluently and I could easily keep reading it. Good job Coral.
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