Tuesday 30 September 2014

Shadows... by Jamie!


Shadows never used to follow you around, they were extremely lonely and never had any friends. Until one precious little day, a girl named Zoella asked if they would join the humans, maybe not just the humans, maybe… everything. The shadows couldn’t tell if she was serious or not, but they agreed that it could be a new start for them. They cautiously followed everything around everywhere, they were simply attached to their new friends, whether it was a human, an animal or even an object. They never left their side, yet when it got dark, the shadows left their buddies behind. Who knows where the shadows are when it’s dark, I don’t think anyone does, but that's just life. So many questions to be ask… but not so many answers.

6 comments:

  1. ...Shadows...

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  2. Wow, Jamie - this is a mesmerising piece of writing - I love the idea of shadows having thoughts and lives of their own! I think we should print a copy of this and put it in your literacy book.
    Mr K :-)

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  3. wow Jamie i love this piece of writing!!!

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  4. wow that's a brilliant story keep on going

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  5. brilliant 100w/c Jamie

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